By Naomi Shihab Nye
A boy told me
if he roller-skated fast enough
his loneliness couldn't catch up to him,
the best reason I ever heard
for trying to be a champion.
What I wonder tonight
pedaling hard down King William Street
is if it translates to bicycles.
A victory! To leave your loneliness
panting behind you on some street corner
while you float free into a cloud of sudden azaleas,
pink petals that have never felt loneliness,
no matter how slowly they fell.
Reasons I'm jealous of this poem:
-the title
-the whole message
-the line 'his loneliness couldn't catch up to him'
-how the author wonders if this concept also works with bicycles
-the wording
-how smooth and swift practically, how it is phrased
-I wish I could write something amazing like this
-It's so simple I think 'why didn't I do that?'
-'to leave your loneliness panting behind you on some street corner'
-I'm jealous of this poem
-It's a fact.
-Alec Hardison
It is a great poem.
ReplyDeleteCani. Leave other unwanted feelings panting on the corner?
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